Trifextra – Finish The Story…


Today’s Music: Gotye – Hearts A Mess

Trifextra challenge:
This weekend, they provide the first 33 words of a story. Entrants have to provide the final 33.
Voting is done by the community, so if you want to, head over to their page and vote. Or just go read the other entries.
Seriously, they get some very talented people!
(*The words in bold are the Trifecta part. The rest is all me…)

“There’s nothing cute about it,” he said. The register of his voice indicated decision more so than discussion.

She disagreed heartily and privately, staring past his head and out the window behind him.

He turned to where she was looking.
Too slowly.
It chomped through the window, leaving nothing of him but twisted glasses and one sock.
She scratched her youngest under it’s maw.
“So Cute.”

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96 responses to “Trifextra – Finish The Story…

  1. Now that is cute!

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  2. Depraved a bit as well, but cute (I hate that word)

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  3. Love it!!! What a creative take in this. Great job!

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  4. EG That Squaks! Er, Rawks!
    You are too damned funny. Great entry.
    -Still giggling-

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  5. Gosh, how flattering that you featured Wonderbutt in your story! 😉

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  6. It probably says a lot (of not good things) about me that I laughed at nothing left but ‘twisted glasses and one sock’. I like your creative take on the prompt!

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  7. Hi,
    I loved it, I am still laughing, well done. 😆

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  8. Leave it to you, Guap. Funny.

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  9. Interesting..

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  10. you have a scary wonderful imagination EG. continue…

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  11. Where’d the other sock go? LOL!!! Hysterically funny response El Guapo, I love it!

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  12. this is just pure random greatness – wow.. I LOVE it!!! he turned too slowly.. lol oops… shouldn;t have been so ding darned stubborn now huh…. 🙂

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  13. This one made me LOL out loud. A wonderful twisted take on the challenge!

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  14. Very, very ‘cute’…..and well written. Your mind may be a bit twisted, but that really isn’t a big surprise.

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  15. whiteladyinthehood

    Guapo, I had to read that twice and then busted out laughing…hhmmm…you are twisted….but, also cute.
    🙂

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  16. Well … a violent chomp and cute in so few words providing insight into a Guaponian mind of warped synapses. Well done.

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  17. Crazy town! Nice pic!

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  18. What the…
    You are crazy
    But everyone thinks you are cute so it mut be okay.

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  19. hehe only you! Great take on the story. Loved it! (note the exclamation mark)

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  20. DRAT! Yours is better than mine! I’ll get you next week, El Guapo!

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  21. Creative! I like it! Nice work Gaup.

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  22. Fun stuff! I like this a lot. Beauty is in the eye of the homicidal monster-raising momma.

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  23. You have no idea how much I needed this right now. Thank you,
    Red.

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  24. I love this! and the line, “She scratched her youngest under its maw..” Hilarious!

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  25. OhMyGod – I did not see that coming! Really good!

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  26. Whoa, did NOT see this coming. Bahahahaha! I am actually jealous of this entry. You rocked it.

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  27. Awww, look at the cute baby eating.

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  28. Ha! Sort of an amusing retelling of Grendel, I think. 🙂

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  29. Love the way this goes back to “cute”. Because it is DECIDED. Also decidedly cute. =) I loves me the little monsters (of which I haz three).

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  30. He’s adorable, caw and all!

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  31. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so I hope you were able to cast your votes. (There’s still just over two hours left if not!) Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

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  32. Excellent. One sock.

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  33. The twist at the end is creepy…you’re a great writer!

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  34. Oh, the cute little bugger must’ve been hungry for a late night snackie poo! I like this one the best of all your entries, guap! It had a macabre, zany flair to it and it reminded me of my chitluns!

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  35. That’s cute! ^^

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  36. The thought of the one sock will probably stick with me for awhile. I also really enjoyed the song and video. What a great video! Funny I was just reading about exclamation marks in my grammer book. It said only use when appropriate. Now I know why learning grammer didn’t stick with me the first time it seems so boring and a little bit confusing at times! ahhh that felt good.

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    • I’m glad the sock will stay with you better than it did with its wearer.
      And I feel your pain on the grammar. It’s the apostrophe that will probably do me in, starla…

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      • Your in good company I treat apostrophes like I treat coma’s or is it comas? I like to toss them around like I’m feeding chickens or like grinding pepper. So much to learn so little time. I’m going to continue to plow through my grammer book.

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  37. Giant monsters always make a great ending to any story. Why do you think the Bible ends with revelation?

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  38. Completely adorable! It’s what really happens at the end of every Yo Gabba Gabba episode, right? RIGHT???? I don’t know how I missed commenting on this! I know I read it the first time around.

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  39. is it just me or that monster has some resemblance to sweet tooth from twisted metal?

    twinsies http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/02/ciu/cf/bd/6a8c36c622a0f6ea4b162110.L.jpg

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  40. I do love a happy ending.

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Ahem *best Ricky Ricardo voice* Babble-OOOoooo!!!

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